Spinning Round and Round

Spinning round and round
Giggles swirling around my ears
Giggles coming from me
 
Spinning round and round
Dress up to my waist
Gently undulating up and down
A blur all around me
 
Spinning round and round
Faster and faster
Laughter turn into sobs
Tears down my cheeks
 
I can’t see a thing
My head feels heavy
But I keep
Spinning round and round
 
My legs give out and I stagger to the ground
The blades of grass prick my skin
Grab hold of them
steady me
 
Spinning round and round
A blur all around me
 
I lay down to sleep
Better to stop
Spinning round and round

2 Comments

  1. The pacing of this poem is amazing! It is so appropriately named as it made you feel dizzy as it starts off happy and then swirls you around! Great! Im so glad this was your first piece of yours that I read! Im Sold!

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